lostandalone
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Post by lostandalone on May 23, 2005 14:17:30 GMT -5
this is what i started with: Open veins slit all the way down Crimpson eyes watching me Regretting, regretting. Two cities lie with a moat full of blood Flowing freely In my veins Life has to change... Took a razorblade and slit it for kicks... Hacked the s**t but don't give a f**k... and this is what i turned it into, it isn't much but i really didn't have much to work with  i call it citys of bloodI hold the blade Once again And start the pain As I cut once more Opening my arms Beneath the flesh My own crimson eyes watching But only watching Not really seeing Two cities Drowning in blood Flowing freely Down from my veins I can see the people Crying for me to stop I'm killing them And I laugh So much darkness I have to change I can’t keep this up I can’t keep doing this I took the razorblade Slitting my wrist For nothing more than a whim Hacked open the very *friendly* person Why should I give a f**k It’s not my f**king fault! |
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Post by olganoraph on May 23, 2005 16:27:42 GMT -5
wow, very much betterfied
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lostandalone
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Post by lostandalone on May 24, 2005 9:16:07 GMT -5
wow, very much betterfied why thank ye |
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neverlaugh
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Post by neverlaugh on May 24, 2005 9:50:08 GMT -5
i believe you like the word f**k more than it deserves and also i like the title! most of all the second was betterfied! ;D
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Post by olganoraph on May 24, 2005 11:14:04 GMT -5
Definetly, I suck at writing lol, Umm who are you neverlaugh?
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lostandalone
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Post by lostandalone on May 24, 2005 12:12:19 GMT -5
*hugs neverlaugh* thank you! thank you! thank you!  |
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Post by Necromancer on May 25, 2005 19:21:58 GMT -5
...... [shadow=red,left,300]wow. summers here already. anyone hear from any of the members that haven't posted in the past week or something? (depressed)  my computer sucks. but anyhoo. good poem,blahblahblah. don't you think theres a bit more blood than there is needed? please pardon the sarcasm..[/shadow] |
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Post by Raiden on May 25, 2005 19:28:22 GMT -5
welcome back necro, and no I haven't heard anything. But if you see Lance, be sure to tell him that his spelling sucks
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Post by olganoraph on May 25, 2005 21:36:30 GMT -5
I haven't seen heidi on here in forever...
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Post by Necromancer on May 25, 2005 21:50:07 GMT -5
sad.
isn't it?
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lostandalone
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Post by lostandalone on May 26, 2005 10:37:10 GMT -5
That's why it's called citys of blood
*starts singing*
blood
blood
blood
blood
blood
blood
blood
blood
blood
blood *stops cuz she's bored and stairs into space.*
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Post by Raiden on May 26, 2005 12:36:12 GMT -5
i believe you like the word f**k more than it deserves and also i like the title! most of all the second was betterfied! ;D who doesn't like the word f**k? f**k f**k f**k f**k..... |
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Post by Raiden on May 26, 2005 12:37:56 GMT -5
it's very..... interesting. the poem, I mean
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neverlaugh
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Post by neverlaugh on May 26, 2005 13:26:26 GMT -5
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lostandalone
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Post by lostandalone on May 26, 2005 23:20:53 GMT -5
cool eye roll thing
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Post by Angelofwhitefire on May 26, 2005 23:52:09 GMT -5
way to go lost your poetrys improving, lol i remember your first poem
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neverlaugh
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Post by neverlaugh on May 27, 2005 19:13:42 GMT -5
oooooohhhhh!!!! what was it?  |
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Post by Ashes on May 27, 2005 20:43:24 GMT -5
i want to hear, i mean read, this!
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Post by Angelofwhitefire on May 28, 2005 23:06:15 GMT -5
Sorry can't post it, i just receved death threats
but i will say this, it was really bad.
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Post by olganoraph on May 29, 2005 12:49:03 GMT -5
Wow I'm feeling a bit skitsophrenic in this post  Angel and lost are the same people... |
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Post by Ashes on May 30, 2005 9:53:27 GMT -5
angel and lost? Jac and lost the same person? that's funny!
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neverlaugh
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Post by neverlaugh on May 30, 2005 11:00:39 GMT -5
"you dont know who lost is! you dont know who lost is! you dont know who lost is! you dont know who lost is!..." *singing*
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Post by Angelofwhitefire on May 30, 2005 23:58:25 GMT -5
when lost gets back from vacation she is going to laugh at this. . . . or kill everyone, eather if she is in a good or bad mood.
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Post by olganoraph on Jun 1, 2005 9:57:34 GMT -5
I'm confused...
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Post by Raiden on Jun 3, 2005 20:32:47 GMT -5
way to go lost your poetrys improving, I f**k ducks at night! i remember your first poem Jacqui, that's sick |
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Angel and lost are the same people...